Bomb Village

Me encanta la compo en ᮧulo recto en primer plano y oblicua en el fondo todo ello roto por las imagenes humanas, pero me parece que está® demasiado centradas. Un peque�o crop en la izq IMHO creo que mejorarí¡ la foto.

Juan,

This is a fine portrait but I think it would be better if the central girl were more off center and the brightness in the the right center were not so prominent. Here's an idea for an alternate crop. Plus, I played a bit with the saturation and contrast. There are some new problems with my version but I hope it will give you some ideas.

GungaJim

very good..congrats.

Poignant shot. These children appear years older than their ages. Gungajim's crop is good, but in some ways I really like the space around the children. For me, it tells more of the story.

Thank you for comments and rates specially suggestion, and for all

of u that have make already a comment in this pic even before that i

posted for rating, many thanks

I like it!