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Just asking for a peoples opinion on this portrait. Also take a look

at a few of the others I have in my image gallery.

Thanks

The composition is good. Two things bother me. First is the coloring. If the model is to have no color then it image should be "hi key" . If the model is in color the color should be brighter and more distinctive. The bodice and the upper chest area have the same tone. Small point, get rid of the belt, it draws the eye to the edge of the cushion.