See org

does this effect detract from the org?

This life is ending. The softness doesn't do justice to the stark reality of the sadness of the original. But, then again, I'm just partial to that one. I do like that you removed the two light spots by the stem.

It works for me. Your foggy treatment and dark mood suggest late hours, end of day, and gives also a melancholic twists to your flower. Very nice