Soaking in the morning sun

Comments?

Get the flash off the camera, and angle it so that you cannot see the reflection in the glass.

I must agree with David about the flash. But for now, I would remove the flash light in the window with Photoshop.

I am drawn to the fundamental idea and Window light.

 

Further to other's comments on a technical perspective:

 

Why not look at using availble light to fill the front and side of the subject when using back light as the main source rather than an harsh flash.

 

Experiement with refectors - White bed sheets / aluminium foil are a good inexpensive start.

 

And experiemnt bounce fill flash, but I'd encouge you to play with one light source first.

 

The horizontal and verticals of the window cut the model's neck and breast, which IMO damage and detract from the composition.

 

The model looks slightly strained, not relaxed - there appears to be tension in the rigt arm, neck and right foot.

 

I'd like to see more window light images experiement and see if you agree with my critique.

 

Regards.

 

 

The idea is great, but I do agree that the model looks a little tense, also the light patch of grass looks a little out of colur gamut