b&w Garlic

Nice in every way except for being a little soft overall and some of the highlights have no details.

Lovely lighting and soft focus.

Nice, but not original

Please say what do you think of this - what could/should be done

differantelly?

Shading is flat and without much impact. At the same time, the white highlights are over exposed and washed out.This type of situation requires lighting that is directional for shadowing and highlighting of detail, while being soft to avoid overexposure of the highlights. There needs to be a full spectrum of shade from a pure black somewhere on the image, to a full white elsewhere. Keep trying.