Fleeting Glimpse

Please tell me what you think about it... This was shot on the Ponte

Vecchio in Florence.

You have a distracting object in the right. The model looks like running out of picture. The main idea is that the subject is the young woman not the wall.

I like the idea but I do tend to get drawn in to reading what's on the wall though. I would prefer to see a bit more of a recognisable figure on the left I think to add more to the story. (She could be staring at a bit of cloth hanging on a line if you know what I mean.) I do quite like the ambivalent expression.

Apart from the distracting left element, I think this is very good! Her look of surprise is great, and the wall makes a very good city mood background.