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Comments and critique are welcome !!

just wonderfull.

Beautiful work. The dress, pose, hand, dynamic of hair, and beautiful model. Lovely potrait.

The best of the series. Extraordinaria. Saludos.

perfect! 7/7

praise worthy art in all respects. regards!

excellent Pose and lighting

The color, background, composition and pose is simply superb.

Not everyone can be creative with just a gray background and a single light. I love this shot, the colors, the model, the hair... everything.

Stunning Image... very well made!

excellent capture

Fantastic, love the movement on the hand and DOF! Beautiful model!

Absolutely fantastic, love the movement and DOF! Very, Very beautiful model - indeed!

 

 

I like the lighting very much but I find the blurry hand and the hair in her face distracting. I would also clone out the seam in the dress (center foreground). Both hands up or the right hand behind her back would work better from my personal point of view. Also that detail (rose?) on her dress should either face the front or be hidden around the back. It sort of takes away from the nice flow of the fabric. I would clone that out also. I would add a reflector on the left to add some detail to the shadow area and in a perfect world also add a little rim light to separate the dress from the background.

I like as it is. Adding all the changes that Dennis suggest make other picture. I agree the hand in a little distracting, but it one part that add perspective and dynamics to the shoot just IMHO.

Beautiful model and great expression.

There is something very captivating about this photo. It is simple yet grabs your attention. And I think part of it is the dynamic quality created by the hand and hair so I totally disagree with the previous comment about those. Well done.

Nice work! I mostly agree with what's already been said. There might be too much sharpening or maybe I'm looking too hard but there looks to be a lot of artifacts on the dress where fine detail really isn't that important --the face and hair is what's important. I like the background and the movement of the piece

Great pictures. Which equipment you used for the picture?

 

Regards

 

Alvaro

I use Nikon D3 with Nikon 85mm f 1,4.