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Kind of experimental

Critique welcomed. Thanks for looking

it's pretty good but and i see what you were getting at, but it's not quite hitting me. i like the echo of the floodlights with the barbecue. but the baseball diamond and buildings in the background are a little distracting and take away from the effect. yes i do realize you couldn't just move these! :) it detracts from the composition.

while i like the warm colors, i tried it in black and white and like the effect a little better. it has a more mechanical feel to it, and reminds me a little of Kertesz's work. but that's just my opinion of course.

Thanks Matt,Doug.

I concidered a b/w conversion, Which I'm actually quite comfortable with, but wanted to try something a little different with color than the normal levels, ect. Because of the high contrast, I definately see where it would work just as good in b/w.(if not better ) Usually I tend to stay away from overly high contrast when working in color.