44 trigger - texture hot gulps of air

I like the pattern; I can almost feel the texture of the fan gaurd. The colors almost blend a bit much, but I think it still works.

I like this shot but it may be a bit busy. But it is good none the less.

I like the shot itself, but I'm undecided as to theme fit. There is certainly pattern there, but I don't really get "texture" from this. On the composition side of things, I kind of wish the top and the right side were more balance. Nice shot in anycase,

 

Cheers,

 

Mark

From the title and the linear textures in background, I'm assuming that those represent hot air - so an other texture in addition to the metal grid of the fan cover. The colours work well in evoking a torrid atmosphere.

 

I find the composition well balanced as it is (the heavier fan centre balances the wider background area top). My only suggestion would be to switch the fan on (both for aesthetics and comfort!).

 

The idea to include textures in air is a very good one PT (hope I've understood right). I like the result.

This has a funky, retro feel, PT - I like it; warm colours indeed. I'd prefer a bit more space to the right and on top (for the air to breathe, naturally.)

Dominique you are right the texture is in the air and (also) the fan grid could be considered some kind of texture or patternd... i also wanted to evidence the blur of the fan to evocate even more the need of fresh air, and also the choice of leaving few space on left and over the fan is tied to the idea that a claustrofobic small space should be more evocative of the lack of air... but probably i went too conceptual.