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just playing with my camera

whilst i really like the image - i think that the overriding graininess makes it look a bit flat. something needs to lift him up a bit. but i really like the positioning of the guy and his stance and his glance.

how so? what do you think would be better? possibly less grain?

Thanks for the comment!

 

Jonathan

maybe just a little less grain (as i do think the grain works - its just that because there is no separation between the body and th background that it feels a little flat) and more contrast, like have the background a little lighter or darker perhaps? so that there is even more differenace in shade between the body and the background though it would help to know whether the grain is from using a fast film or whether this is digitally manipulated? hope that helps!