marahjj 0 Posted September 10, 2006 I was wondering if you felt the background was too flat or does it work with the minimal approach to the composition? Any thoughts? Link to comment
gabewalker 0 Posted September 10, 2006 i like it, though a little variety in the water would be nice. Like subtle shades of grey, dunno. Link to comment
beaz 0 Posted September 10, 2006 I like it - I'm kind of partial to minimilist compositions. Since the form of the grass and reflections seems to be the main point of interest, it might be stronger cropped to square format from the right. Just a thought - some might prefer the sense of space of all the calm water. Regards, Jerry Link to comment
davidmccracken 2 Posted September 10, 2006 Perhaps a little colour saturation in the grass would help. I like and don't think the water is too flat. Possibly a different composition could make it stronger too. Link to comment
marahjj 0 Posted September 10, 2006 Gabe, Jerry & David~ Thank you very much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I'll try your suggestions and repost. Regards! Link to comment
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