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To be continued..

I do love the concept here, however I feel the outfit doesn't suit the setting...purly my own opinion. What do you think?

Possibly. Then I understood that any clothing is excess.

Look another photo,please.

Background is sharp - but I see you can not blur it with this camera.

In about 50 years it will have a nostalgic feel to it, for now, it's an uninspired snapshot.

Desaturate this and it would, except for a few things that are modern, look like a 1950's pinup photo. Not particularly well done, but all the important things up front.

Sorry but I agree with Tim. This has the 'snapshot' look all over it. Sometimes 'snapshot' can be good, but in this case it is reminiscent of the shots I took in highscool of my girlfriends lol.

 

The lighting is a little too warm for my liking, the shadow detracts, and the outfit was pulled out of the 80's (although the 80's are coming back...)

 

I like the grass...it has the potential to provide a decent background. I also like how you took the photo from slightly above the girl, this provides a nice perspective.

 

Keep practicing, I know I need to do the same.