Seagull

Thanks for your critique

Hanka L.

Hi,

I love this picture especially all the different shades of blue.

I am certainly no expert. As a matter of fact your technical skills are far superior to mine I am a novice. But I am wondering how the picture would look without the second Segal and a little less blue on the bottom

I can see why you left it in because of it's postioning it gives a relative feeling of height to the other Segal.

but I also find it diverting my eye away from the main subject.

Have you tried cropping him out and perhaps taking a little ocean off

the bottom so the main segals eyes are positioned at the top cross section

in your one third rule.

Just a thought, You did a beautiful job I love the sharpness of his black wing tips too exceptional technical skills.

Regards,

Diane