uneboite 0 Posted August 30, 2006 I like your glass a lot PT! Obviously a good theme fit. I like the textured-paterns in the glass (good for next month's assigment). My only nit-pick (a PT term, not sure I spelled it correctly), the right part of the picture feels too busy to my personnal tastes. Maybe because of the white diagonal line which seems too white-washed and doesn't bring anything good to the whole (Imho). So I would suggest either crop the right part or clone some glass pattern in the line so it won't break the composition. Link to comment
uneboite 0 Posted August 30, 2006 Here's a cloned version, which respects more your composition PT. But at the same time, the image now makes no sense, since this line seems to come from an open window or door. Link to comment
mandar1 0 Posted August 30, 2006 PT I like the idea. However, whatever that is there at the bottom right corner is a bit distracting. It is in that context that I like Joe's suggestion. It defenitely seems tighter. Link to comment
robidooo 0 Posted August 30, 2006 The suggestion given by Joe is a nice improvement to this already interesting photo. The texture is really good and is well served by the fact this is a B&W photo. My guess is that having colors in this photo would be really distracting. Link to comment
seven 0 Posted August 30, 2006 I enjoy the light which is well controlled exposure-wise, PT. The off kilter angle makes something of the lines that would be fairly uninteresting presented as viewed in reality. I like what Joe did with the bottom right; a touch of yellow tint might be good. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted August 31, 2006 I am also enjoying the light in this shot. I very much like the geometry also. Joe's crop while good seems too basic. There are interesting patterns to the right, I wonder if there is another shot which includes them more. As is they detract since they appear to be going slightly off in a different direction than the intersecting lines to the left. Knic Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted August 31, 2006 I like the original, fits very nicely the square format, with the uneveness of lines ,Good forms and light penetration.Fits the theme, no nits from me. Link to comment
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