rkynast 1 Posted August 20, 2006 The theme fits, so nice work on that account; the composition is good. There is a lot going on in this shot, PT and I like the overall idea. I have no good suggestions to assist you. Good work overall. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted August 20, 2006 I like the idea of the closed glass door and the reflections. I like the womans placement on the frame, even I would have liked at least more of her eyes . The composition is too busy for my taste, I try to think what could be done to better the situation. The handle looks a distraction. I really don't find a solution ;-)) but it fits the theme PT. Link to comment
dominiquedodge 0 Posted August 21, 2006 I'll comment spontaneously without reading the comments above: The strength of the photo comes from the numerous curves which lead the eye from the door handle(s), hand, elbow,shoulder, cheeck and then to the swish of the hair. I like that effect (without it the photo would be much less original) and I think that anything that can be done to enhance that would be beneficial. So I suggest crop right to remove door edge, clone the stray finger extreme left, convert to B&W and enhance contrast. just ideas of course. Link to comment
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