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Please critique. The model loves this photo. ANY AND ALL COMMENTS

greatly appriciated.

Thanks

-T

hi,

the lighting and colors are okay, but a few things are distracting. first: the pole/post between her legs. if she would have moved a foot or two to your left, that could have been eliminated. the lamp, lamppost and orange flowers in the background are a little distracting too. a smaller aperture (if available) would have helped there, but again, either moving you, or her, would have made it better.

again, the lighting is very good.

First off, the obvious, she's stunningly beautiful and photogenic. The attitude is all there, mostly because you have to look three times to determine the mood she's in, and you still don't know, such is a casual flirt.

Secondly, and most important, she shows Poise; the most rare of qualities, in front of a camera. Most supermodels never show the poise this young lady does. They learn how to walk, they never learn how to move. They learn how to be looked at, they never learn how to look out of their eyes. Poise is inner-flow and movement and harmony with your surroundings. Poise is not about beauty, its about music. Its photographable. That alone makes this a highly enjoyable print to see. I do agree, the flowers behind her back are a bit bright, but I really like the light on her face and dress. This is one model who could never be photographed enough. Bravo Todd :)

Thanks guys for the comments.

I'm sure you just made the models day with your comments Neil! We are trying to schedule another photo shoot sometime next week. I will take all the comments into consideration. (it's the only way to get better!)

Unfortunatly I cannot fix any of my posted photos because I had to learn the HARD way about the importance of backing up your photos to a CD/DVD. I had a computer MELTDOWN a couple of days ago and lost EVERYTHING!! I have since purchased an external hard drive to save my photos. All originals will then be saved to a CD/DVD! live and learn right???

Thanks again.

-Todd