jet society - males Jeroen van Onselen

Fine portrait (if a little heavy crop for my tastes) but I'm not sure the telephone dirtectory (??) adds much....

Good capture of the subjects face. I didn't like the lighting here very much when I first looked at the image, but the more I look at it the more I like it. The magazine is a bit distracting, though. It seems to be an important part of the photograph, but I can't really be sure what to make of it because it's out of focus. This photo would work better for me if the magazine was either identifiable or less prominent.

A witty portrait that shows something original about your subject! Others might disagree, but I like the way his hand intrudes on his face--it's not much, and it pulls the photo together well.