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Your copyright statement is in a very (un)fortunate spot.

I like this, I stop everytime I see it. I agree the copyright has to go...

 

For my taste, for me- I would crop it, maybe to show just a litle of the lace on the panties, but that is me and another photo. But the upper part I love the hand....all the seams in the skirt.

Now this is really well done. It's a creative and graphically powerful twist and I love it.

I keep glancing at this and ... I think it could've been framed more strongly. The other related image was way too centered, and this is stronger. One of two possibilities on a reframe. For both of my suggestions, the panties section should move up in the frame. Seems to be crowding the bottom edge of the frame. Just a tad. Showing more of the orange skirt as backdrop below. Then, two paths to take. One would be to crop top of frame to just show the orange skirt eliminating the hand and darker backdrop - focusing on the erotic vision of the panties. A second attack might be to have both hands showing and forming a symmetrical upper composition with a straight line of the hem of the dress in the upper part of image.

I like the slight asymmetry of the legs though, one horizontal, one slightly angled - I think it adds visual interest.

Intriguing idea, very well posed and technically spot on.

I can hear you laughing John.

Hi John,

 

Nicely done in all respects! I love fun photos like this, quite simly because this photo looks spontaneous and since (obviously) the model trusted your whims and suggestions. The dull brown background perfectly compliments the model's skin tones as well as her lingere and dress. This photo just worked out splendidly aside from being something different.