Untitled - Copyright 2006 Jason Cuvelier

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Very different. Wondering what she is doing, I feel that needs to be improved, why this pose or otherwise contact with th e viewer. Give it a story !

Glare on the wall is light disturbing. Colors are great .

 

Wolf

 

Yes, colors are great. Odd but interesting pose. She seems to be "disappearing" into the darkness to the right of the photo, I'm not sure if that is a plus or minus, I would have tried a hair light or some lighting in front of her to bring her out more.

Agree with Bill. Need more separation between hair and bg. Pose and model are both interesting.