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How could I cut this to improve the result? Anyone?

you are right about her being too centered. i think I'd cut the left 1/6 so the the diagonal line of the cliff leads into the frame. ?and perhaps the right 1/6 also. this would make it a vertical.? jh

How about this?

The only thing in the photo that I would change is the green thing on the side of the lake. It is distracting. I would crop it out of take it out with the clone tool in Photoshop. I really like your use of colour in the photo by using contrast of red and cyan. The colours are balanced beautifully.