Schoolyard steps

thanks for viewing and critiques

I think the composition is great and very original, personally I would have liked to see the bottom part of the photo in focus. Well done.

wonderful idea. i only wish the execution were better, clearer. try stepping down the exp next time for greater depth of field.

Thanks Ali and Jim for your comments...in fact I did two mix: this one with shallow DoF, another one with focussed (unblurred) front area...I like the one I submitted better but will provide the other one for you to tell me what you think because I am interested in different opinions...

here is the original mix of the 3 photos, if you have time tell me which one you prefer.

Original and nice.very good composition.Regards Michael.

great idea, shape, colours, originality, it's all there

Laurent, This really drew my eye. I love how the colors pop from the gray asphalt. Personally, I like the other one a little better with the in-focus arrow, but I can see what you were doing here. You've isolated the exact point of action with the careful management of the blur.