black and white in southern california Shotgun - Duotone

Nice tones, though I think the exposure on the stock could be burned in a little.

I've just started working with stylized B&W images and would like

your feedback.

I must agree with Jason, but still I couldn't help giving you a 9 for aesthetics. Great photo.

It is almost organic. I agree with the comments; burn the highlight a little to make it less prominent.

Excellent! I kinda like the highlights on the stock but I guess I'd have to compare it to one where it was toned down a bit to make an accurate call. I think you've done a great job here and I admire what you've done. Great lighting, great composition and great tones. Keep up the good work!