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My friend asked me to take a few photos of her to help kickstart a

hypothetical modeling career, but it was my first time shooting a

model. I'm requesting critiques on this and a few other shots from

our session. Your comments would be very helpful for next time!

I think this is the best out of the shoot. The hand being cut off at the right throws me a bit. This might also look cool in B&W!

Excelente encuadre, perfecta luz, bello color y magnifica composicion, saludos cordiales Dan.

I agree that this is the best of the folder. I like the contrast, color and the directional lighting. Just a touch more like on the left would be wonderful.