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My friend asked me to take a few photos of her to help kickstart a

hypothetical modeling career, but it was my first time shooting a

model. I'm requesting critiques on this and a few other shots from

our session. Your comments would be very helpful for next time!

I think this one shows the most technique amongst the folser, and although simple, the rest of the folder has some great images. Well done. You should experiment more with her.

Not my favourite in your portfolio but well taken. very creative

By far the best shot of all those on your site due mainly to the lighting technique and manipulation you have employed.What tends to weaken the other shots with this model is the untidy background, choice of clothing. If you were to shoot using film as apposed to digital you would gain much better results and have to spend less time with digital manipulation. As always all photography is subjective and you do have a clear relationship wit this model,try experimenting with the mood of your lighting. Good work and a unique syle in the making.

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I agree that this is probably the best shot you have. It is the most artistic rendition of this subject matter I've seen on this site. Very well done.