Another Playground

This is very nice...I'm not fond of the space on each side of the red poles, and would crop both sides to do so. This leaves the rightmost chain leaving on the right hand side, so a further crop from the bottom would get the chain to exit on the bottom of the frame again. Something to think about.

Brilliant colours, great use of lines. Very interesting.

I liked it more the way it forst appeared before I scrolled over -- without the red on the right -- with the chais leading off into ???

I like it tigher, without the background distracting you on either side.

Great impact!!!