Offset separation

Thought this made an interesting concept - a simple, worn out yellow

line painted years ago on the boardwalk. Comment or suggestions for

improvement anyone?

John,

 

I think this works very well as an abstract. I tend to compose like this too, but I wonder how it would look with that yellow line on a diagonal. Might be fun to try....

I like that idea - would add a different twist to it now wouldn't it. Little comments like that are appreciated since it gives you ideas on exploring alternatives.