Portrait of Nick, my first paid work.

Please forgive me for the specks from the scanner, I still haven't

learned how to clean things up.

 

Natural light, with a umbrela shading him from direct sunlight.

Developed by a local prolab as I was not happy with Kodak.

I like it and so did the client. But what could I have done better.

 

If you rate it below 5 please tell me why in comments or send me a

email.

I would like to see a little more focus down into his shirt collar at least. Maybe it's just the computer scan. This photo's image appears to be fresh so that's why it seems just a hair too soft in the face too. It is a nice photo. Thanks for showing it.

Thanks Emma for your comments. I think you may be right about the scan. The lab that scanned this roll didn't have the best scanner, (it top's out at 300dpi). Your right about the focus issue, I didn't notice that, thanks. I'll have to check the print and see if it's that way to.