Jump to content

bridge


calvatron

taken with a Canon 20D Lens 50mm macro 1:1


From the category:

Studio

· 29,690 images
  • 29,690 images
  • 100,112 image comments


Recommended Comments

I would like to know how this photo can be improved if you decide to

rate with a low score. It is too hard to improve without knowing

what I'm doing wrong. So please critique. Thank you

Link to comment
Guest Guest

Posted

Beautiful Texture and DoF. A Great Photo!
Link to comment
Guest Guest

Posted

It's a nice picture. I'm not too shure about the horizontal. I think I would flip it 90ccw.

 

I have a folder of images similar to this one. Please take a look if you have some time.

 

 

this folder

Cheers,

 

Guillaume

Link to comment
This image makes me wanna hear what he is playing. Those strings in the foreground lead me to his craft and eventually I fade into the sounds of his guitar.
Link to comment
Thank you to all how have commented. I appericate the time spent. I will do the same in return.
Link to comment

The DOF, lighting and pose are wonderful. As a musician, I feel you've really captured the essence of the artist.

 

I'm not sure I'm completely satisfied with the position of the camera, however. I'd like the camera to be looking either precisely down the center of the fretboard (it's not, but rather between the G and B strings), or about 2-3 inches to the right, still aimed toward the sound hole. Or just to the left so that I could see all of the the right thumbnail just next to the knuckles of the right hand. I do like getting some of the right arm in the crop, tho.

 

I believe that you have the skill and vision to deeply explore this subject. It would wonderful to see more.

Link to comment

hello calvin,

 

I don't think you have to improve anything with this picture. I agree with the comment before: as a musician I miss nothing. this picture has incredible tense because of the selective focus and very very sharp contrast. The tones are pretty.Congrats! 7/7

 

bye, marcel

Link to comment
without the forearm in the background the image wouldn't be the same! wonderful angle, wonderful tones, just wonderful!
Link to comment

Well it's great picture, but I would try to crop it some other way - e.g squared or just cut off a bit of the "black" space in the upper part and maybe start at the second fret of the guitar so thet it is more longer and less higher. You could also try to put some more light to the shadows and then increase the contrast.

Cheers

Ana

Link to comment

Very original angle of view, excellent details, I like also very much the very contrasted and dark B&W. Bravo ! great shot !

 

Link to comment

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...