"Satin Sheets", portrait

"Satin Sheets" a portrait

This shot is quite fun, but maybe the skin tone is a bit grey? Also, when viewed in the "medium" size, it appears that there has been quite a bit of touch-up done digitaly. That kind of thing takes a pretty light hand, or it ends up detracting from the portrait.

Retouched forehead is over, overdone.

 

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I like your composition. her hair makes the photo. I might have considered moving her face even just a bit farther diagonally to the right corner, moving her face from the center and emphasizing the hair even more.

wonderful greys. lovely pose, great shot Lorraine

I think this photo is very glamourous, I like the sensual lips and cool eyes. I do find the light a bit harsh as well but overall: good shot of a self-assured lady!!