Waiting For The Train

Please rate and critique.

Composure isn't bad, but it's very messy. I could be called "Girl seated next to train tracks". It also seems to represent a bygone era, yet theres no attempt at making it look aged. Cramp your depth of field to bring your model out of the picture, not blending in so much.

Janie, I like this idea. Wouldn't it be neat if an old steam engine were coming around the bend. There wouldn't be an old depot handy by any chance, somewhere close......Jim