dark angel 2

Do you have any sugestion to improve the image? Any comment will be

welcome.

Jose, I like where you're going with this. It feels too tight though in the frame--the model needs more space around her. I wouldn't prop up her left leg--it seems odd, as though she's holding it in an unnatural position. It makes her foot too much of a focal point. If she dropped her knee naturally, the foot could just hook over her other leg, and the slight shift in position would accentuate her curves much more. Finally, the wall needs decoration. Nothing too bold, as to take away focus, but it's distracting like this--too much negative space. I hope that doesn't seem like I'm picking apart the image, because I do like it. I think with those few subtle changes, it would be great.

This is very good. I prefer this full-length shot to any of the cropped versions. I have to agree with Michael about the bent leg, she should be a bit more relaxed with it. However I respectfully disagree with Michael about the wall. I believe that this is an excellent example of very good use of negative space. I think that your composition is just about perfectly balanced. Also, although I naturally prefer B&W in a fine-art composition like this, your use of brilliant color just blows me away. I give you a very well earned 7/7 for this.

Thank you very much Andre and Michael for your constructive critic. My intention was to bring freedom to the model and to capture her feelings. Best regards

 

Jose