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Too much contrast? White fabric on the upper right corner good or

bad? Tear me apart on this one, I would love some criticism.

I think the contrast works for most parts, but the eyes suffer from it.

The white blanket in the upper right corner is not contributing, I would have liked to see the antennas against an open sky. Personally I wouldn't go near the edge of this roof - brave model! Overall I like the picture.

Couldn't "tear it apart" even if I wanted to, It's just TOO good. I do think that the upper right "white" does distract a bit though. Any other tone or pattern would've worked a bit better. Love the overall look of the shot... Mundane, day-to-day wires and antenna and city scape and laundry contrasted with Gorgeous, sultry, half-naked model. Very exotic. Well thought out (we're assuming that you didn't just "happen" upon this scene yes? :-) ) Excellent work!

Thanks Patrik, Jeff and Paul. The upper right white thing was indeed a bad idea, but once this was all set up I got only enough time to take a few shots before sunset. Guess that's why I kept trying to fool myself that maybe it wasn't that bad after all... Perhaps one day I'll be able to convince the girl (and myself, I'm scared to death of heigths) to go up there again and do it right! Thanks again.

I love the shot!

very nice, original