architecture Louis Kahn's Unitarian Church, Rochester, NY (v.2)

Revised version up for critique. Thanks in advance.

A very strong and interesting composition. I love this style and subject matter. You've managed to get a very soft reflective light and hard shadows, which lends itself to this image. Austere and minimal. Nice approach.

Ah, here is the revised one. Again, I really admire the geometry here, along with the precise composition. The way you've handled the wall and shadows in this one is excellent. We'll look forward to seeing more.