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This is really good.

The lighting is haunting. Very nice.

Haunting is definitely the right word for this.

Captions people! Captions! What is it? Fire? Fog?

It is fog...and behind the bridge there is a soccerfield with its floodlights

please comment.

I get the idea, but I'm not sure it really works for me. Actually, you could crop the lower 20% of the picture. It would help, but I still think the bridge would need some additional breathing space at the top of the picture; another 20%, perhaps.

 

I agree with Philippe. It needs some croping, while I love dark black areas in images the lower area has to much. Just my thoughts.

I tried to follow Philippe's advice and cropped the picture.

The bridge takes now more space on the photo.

Is the crop too tight?

I haven't seen your cropped version yet, but I disagree with the consensus. Cropping the lower part of the image would make the bridge fill up too much of the whole shot, in my opinion. I know it's the subject, but I fear it'd be over-powering if it took up the whole frame. That's just my opinion, though.

Yves,

 

A very exceptional dreamlike image - a digital landscape that isn't digital! I might tone down or or even eliminate some of the small lights at the upper edge so that attention remains focused where it should be.