Flushed !!

Thank you for looking . And feel free to leave any feed back good or

bad. ( i wasnt sure if this is the right area to put this photo

too ) ..

 

Thanks for taking the time to look......... Shawn

A good concept but room for improvement. First, I like the tones of the image and the elements of the shot. I think you could improve this image by having other "hands" at the table. It looks like there is supposed to be a person across from the man as suggested by the small pile of chips. It also seems like there are too many cards sitting in the deck to the left. For me, the liqour bottle should be uncapped and something should be in the shot glass (but I would prefer a short glass with ice in it). The long cigarette implies that the game maybe just started, as there aren't many butts in the ashtray. A nice cigar would suit me better too. Lastly, I think it needs a tighter crop to keep the viewer from straying out of frame and I might play with the lighting a bit. I think the smoke is a great addition though. I hope this helps. It's just my opinion. You're off to a great start. :)