Ruffles

The other is much better. Take away the text and you are left with an image which catches my eye on top left and travels to btm right and out of the frame. Nothing to make my eye stop and rest.

 

Try it in B/W maybe that may highlight what I mean.

The btm left sticks out a bit.

Regards

Louis

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Thank you for the review Louis. Much appreciated. That's why I add the text there to fill in the "void" :).

Crop it a little (left and bottom to get rid of the black corner) and drop the ugly text and you have a very good picture...

Stefan, I've thought about cropping it before, but I thought I'd leave it to give it a bit of dimension.

Thanks for the cooment though.

If your image needs to have text in it, maybe best to start again. I can see where you are heading with the petals curved in focus and the coloured background. Just get the focus bit into a shape which keeps the eye in the image and gives it a natural point to focus.

Are you with me on this?

Thank you so much for the advise Louis. I really appreciate it.