Composition no. 8242

commets? suggestions? critique?

One of the 10 best your 8242 ...

Brilliant!!

Should be filed under 'Fine Art'. Excellent.

Brillant composition. Very well done! I think that perhaps the shadowed part of the building could be a touch lighter. But I love the shape of this and the color of the sky. Wonderful work.

I would also lighten the lesser triangles a bit, and crop for emphasis.

Daily, Ektor, Antoni & Bill - many thansk for you comments.

David,

thanks for taking time to play with the image. the lightening definitely works for me. it is bette.

the corp is good too but it makes it a different image with the prism losing its weight and becoming a second fiddle to the center point connection which now draws teh eye. i presume that was the idea? interesting...

Great shot Naftali !

thanks, Rina!

 

i am adding a lighter, re-cropped version of this shot, with some perspective changes.

 

very well composed Naftali. I join the others about a bit more light on the fg. but anyway works very well.

Nice Picture. I love the line points and shapes !!!

Pnina, thanks for commenting. you have a choice in an alternate version i attached to my previous reply.

 

 

Pearce,

thanks, i am glad you liked it.

Naftali, I also like the linked version. Especiallz because we still can see the background texture I assum also from this building.

Excellent graphic shot. I admired the original and think the edited version is even better. This one would look great on a wall.

Rina & Chris -many thanks for your visits!