charlotte riddervold 0 Posted March 4, 2006 Your rate and contructive criticism are welcome. Thank you. Best regards Charlotte Link to comment
beaz 0 Posted March 4, 2006 I like the strong lines and the intersection of the two perspectives. Normally I wouldn't like the heavy columns dead center, but since the two passages pull the eyes away from center, it works well. You did well with exposure considering the bright background. Not much I would do differently other than perhaps burning in the bright area slightly. Regards, Jerry Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 4, 2006 I agree with Jerry. There is a good feel for volume here and the exposure is very well balanced between outside view and inside. The wire hanging from the ceiling near the left edge of the frame reveals that verticality has been lost on the left side - probably due to very short focal length. I would clean that wire away. All and all excellent shot. Link to comment
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