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Great capture Jason. Love his expression and the colors in this. One recommendation would be to dodge his eyes a little to make them pop. The catchlights in them are nice and should be emphasized.
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Really cute - bright, colorful and appealing. I'm not real crazy about the frame; I think I would like to see the pumpkins without the distortion, but perhaps crop off the top above the pumpkins. A minor thing to me and I really like this shot.
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Jason-

I'm trying something new, bare with me.

 

What I like: The vivid colors & how they compliment each other. The wonderful expression on his face (love the tongue), the cute hat & the way it's turned backwards. The catch-lights in his eyes & the smoothness of his skin & the color of his skin, perfect. The DOF of the background. Your creativity with regard to the frame, I like something different & this makes the image look like it might be a reflection from a mirror he's staring into. I'm going to use this sometime. I normally don't like central compositions, but this works for me, I think in part because the tongue (the focal point) is dead center.

 

What I don't like: The shallow DOF in front of him, I want the big pumpkin & it's stem in focus. The flat lighting, it does not accentuate his wonderful pudgy cheeks causing a lack of definition.

 

Overall I give the image 2 thumbs up! :)

 

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Jayme, thanks for taking the time to give such great and detailed feedback, it is much appreciated. I am not sure if you noticed, but I took to heart the previous feedback relative to vignette and have had great feedback since on the images I have posted. I value your opinion and appreciate it:)
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Hey Jason that is so funny and absolutely adorable! Great shot! I love your work. I appreciate the comments on my pics I am kinda a newbie. Cheers.
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Jason, his expression is priceless. Using the pumpkin patch as a setting was a great idea. I have to say I'm not crazy about the red line. It's taking my eyes away from the subject. While I'm nit picking here, I agree with Jayme's observation about DOF. I also think this could be cropped a bit, especially at the top. Again, I'm just nit picking. This is a really a cute shot!
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Love the shot and love the framing! It's not easy to get a shot like this--1 second later and he's in a completely different pose. Good job!

Robin

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