jennyrator 0 Posted February 21, 2006 Naftali, You did excellent shootings of this subject! -- I have seen some of them on your workspace. I guess I like other pictures of this wall more than this one. The composition here seems to be incomplete. The dark shade side (the right wall) does not look very impressive on the blue background, but the yellow one looks great!!. I would stick to these two colors (which you did in other pictures ? and I absolutely love them). Yellow and blue compliment each other greatly. As I said, I liked shots of this subject you did from different angle much more. Link to comment
drybrain 0 Posted February 21, 2006 Jenya,thanks for taking time and giving a detailed critique. i think i need to play a bit with the blue and make it brighter so the black sticks out better. i went for the geometry in this one, but i see your point about colors. Link to comment
richbh 0 Posted February 22, 2006 Great take on this wonderful feature of the National Gallery. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted February 22, 2006 Another very fine abstract, Naftali. You excel at these. I wonder how this would look in B&W? Link to comment
elgaddy 0 Posted February 22, 2006 I like the gold and blue contrast but I think it would add more had you been able to light up the shaded area with something. Overall a very eye catching photo. Link to comment
tom t 0 Posted February 23, 2006 I like the idea and execution of all of these. In this one I would crop a bit on top to avoid that angle in the middle. For all of them - sell seen! Tom Link to comment
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