denisska waiting for the meal

comments are appreciated.thanx

bring down the yellow is my suggestion. its a cute idea.

Julius,

 

I like the yellow tones. I think if you balanced the color out it would lose its warmth and not convey the same message. I, also, really like the storyboard format. On this image the first two go really well together. I like how the diagonal from her hood leads the viewer up to the middle frame. If I were to make a suggestion, it would be to change the third frame so that it is in balance with the first.

yeah i was thinking that.(meaning the third frame) and the yellow tone - it is there on purpose exactly to warm up (even unnaturally) the whole thing. thanx for your comment :)