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Your opinion and ideas for improvement are welcomed. Peter

interesting patterns. blue lines in dark background. well captured.

 

-John Padmarajan

Peter, this is definitely an eye-catching exposure, but I feel the composition lacks something. It seems too simple, with too much plain black background; the frame is not full enough. But since I'm not sure what it is (!), I don't know what to suggest in terms of how you might have shot it differently.

John, thank you for your comment. Chris, yes, the composition is simple and something that would break the patterns could perhaps help. On the other hand, I was interested whether it could work as it is. I am grateful for any opinion. This is an 80 m tall building of a bank in Bratislava. I have another view in my portfolio. Best regards, Peter