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Running Girl n.1


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Camera: Graphic Elaboration


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This is part of a portfolio I prepared for the 2004 Renova Photo

Contest. Guess in which product class is the Renova business. mandi,

Roberto

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Very original. I have only one thought, or comment. The orientation of roll. In this case, it will work so, thaht the girl is reeling the paper up to the roll. I think, that physical it will looks out better if the paper will be unreel down on the surface. Even so, I know, that your composition is more dramatical and looks out better for advertisement purpose. Anyway, very interesting experiment. :) r.
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... regarding the roll. But I wanted the effect of the paper flapping in the air rather than unrolling on the sand. The contest was aimed to select a picture for Renova advertising on magazines. At the end I ranked ... second.
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Overdone, some good seperate ideas, but the complete image does not give us any message at all. Try to cut in few separate images.

 

cheers Jana

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