Leafs

This was shoot on the banks of loch lomond.

Please comment and rate.

Itai

Ps- thanks to all the photo.neters how commented on my picture A girl and her mom in a bus

your comments were extremely helpful

Among one of I like most in your folio

Thank you to also have a look on my picture also in this forum, thank you.

 

Itai, technically the photo looks fine, but, you know, when I stand back and look at it, to my eye, the rock in the background is too dominant - it keeps grabbing my eye. The leaves at left of center connect to lines in the rock and take my eye up and out the upper right corner. The leaves seem to me to be incidental to the rock rather than the other way around. This tends to make the image look flat. It might be improved by lowering the tonal value of the rock and brightening up the forground. I suspect the photo carries better in print than it does on the web. Regards, Paul

First, I like the colors in the photo; however, the composition doesn't do much for me. My eye wanders all over the scene. I agree with one of the other comments, the photo looks flat to me. Your photo of mother and girl on the bus is very good.

I like the compositon very much. The lines of the rock and the leaf in the upper left work very well with the leaves at the bottom. Nice shot.

An abstract shot. The composition doesn't lead the eye, but the texture's effect is something very well achieved.

A most beautiful study of texture....I really like this piece.

another good phoeot, but my eyes are looking at the rock and the leaves and can't quite make up my mind on what the "purpose" of the photo was. The textures are good though.

Very good shot, for combinations of soft colors and compo. Also great detail in leafs. Regards