first photo on photo.net

I'm not totally happy with this picture and I don't know why. Maybe she should be on the

other side of the frame? Maybe her expression isn't sincere? Any help?

Thanks for the kind words. What a great website.

Compositionally her head has a slight tilt to the left which leads away from the main part of the frame and this might suggest a subtle imbalance. The background has the perfect level of softness. I find myself craving a little more brightness to her skin, it seems a bit underexposed to me. Otherwise a nice first posting.

A Good start indeed.

Hello Patrick, welcome here on the PN. I wish you lot of inspiration, cheers Jana

I like the mood and the tones

Can feel the chilly wind :)

U r true feels like she needs to relax a bit

than askin is it fine ? :)

I cant comment on the technical side as am unaware

am just trying to c them in the artistic view