Amarantine

improvised studio shot

I would have prefered to be closer. I don't like the thing on her left. The empty top of the photo is not needed.

The way she is in the stair is a good idea. I like the way she stairs at the photograph.

I think like this picture :-)

Once again, I'm not a professional, this opinion is what I feel.

Excellent tones. But I agree that there is too much negative space - I think it is because the lower left is so busy with the shawl and candle/bouquet. Still a great shot. Regards.