A first attempt.

This is from my fist attempt at something more than 'snapshots.' I

am strictly a beginner in terms of equipment and technique, and

approached strictly from the point of view of composition, which I

think turned out well. I'd like to hear what some more advanced

photographers think.

Your subject matter is a bit jumbled. Try to make it clearer for the viewer what you want them to see, what you want them to feel.