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trying to create another strong flavor of chinese old fashion

Lovely

nice work

So much going on here, really such an attractive image! Congratulations.

i actually like everything about this photo except that I think the model is just to passive. She just seems to be going through the motions--or lack thereof. A pretty girl, but she just isn't giving anything here. Everything else is very strong, including your camera tilt and choice of setting and dress color. I am not suggesting the pose even be different, it's just that there isn't anything coming from her. Maybe she is new to modeling, but the shot of her where she has the fan and you are looking down on her works much better. It is a fine line, but there she is still quiet, but there is a sense of purpose and confidence in the pose that is missing here.