nomade 1 Posted December 15, 2001 For me it's not clear what's she doing and the general composition sense... Is it a portrait? No... Is it a PJ/Stree shot? No... :-) Link to comment
markcarp 0 Posted December 17, 2001 I think it would have worked better further down the stairs where the next set going up wouldn't look like it is going to hit her head. The fence(?) in the back is distracting too. I like her pose, but the bare shoulder seems a little out of place and contrived to me. A good start, I think. Just keep at it. Link to comment
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