penang Bonzai Cut

Photo shot during the visit of a boudist temple. Looking for how the

photo comes over, whether it conveys the serenity of the

environment. Please provide me feedback

Pity we do not see the man's face.

Also, you need to crop more carefully: the blue stuff at the bottom next to the man, and the littel white line where the white edge touches the lefthand frame are distracting. Ditto for the piece of black stuff coming out of the man's back.

Compositionally, there is too much emtpy stuff that does not convey anything. Consider having the man on the other site of the bonsai, facing the camera, have as little of the white stone in the background and go fo a portrait format to fix that.

And finally, your frame is, erm... ugly (sorry). Drop the green frame - you don't need it, really.

Sorry - it's a long list, but you asked, no? And feel free to disagree - no offense intended.

Tom